tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post114538644742561108..comments2023-09-25T05:04:32.754-05:00Comments on Laughing Ghosts: An Autograph Of SortsPat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145603650500008772006-04-21T02:14:00.000-05:002006-04-21T02:14:00.000-05:00"promises made under the bed"...Inflatable Ark", y..."promises made under the bed"...Inflatable Ark", you rustled up a brilliantly clear picture of the fear and chaos a storm can cause, coupled with the beauty of the magical rainbow representing safety and salvation. So much impact here. I love it!Elena Horowitz-Brookeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05603633911595032921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145499667494151092006-04-19T21:21:00.000-05:002006-04-19T21:21:00.000-05:00ditto with Auroraditto with AuroraJ. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145478642022536302006-04-19T15:30:00.000-05:002006-04-19T15:30:00.000-05:00seems i'm late for the party :)love the poem!!!seems i'm late for the party :)<BR/>love the poem!!!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145462813015328242006-04-19T11:06:00.000-05:002006-04-19T11:06:00.000-05:00Thank you Aurora! (I can too spell your name!)Lara...Thank you Aurora! (I can too spell your name!)<BR/><BR/>Lara, thank you for your beautiful comment!<BR/><BR/>Steve, I hope you and your computer aren't menu items at KFC!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks, Floots!!<BR/><BR/>Thank you Michelle e o!! Your comments are always appreciated!!<BR/><BR/>Vaughn, thanks!! <BR/><BR/>Pincushion, if I would've known what metaphors were back in the late 60's, no telling what I could've done with my life!! Thanks!! (I think I know now...)<BR/><BR/>Thanks Pris!! Always a pleasure to see you here!<BR/><BR/>Russell from where you're coming from you're never late!! Thanks!!<BR/><BR/>That's funny Eric. Growing up one of our neighbors would literally take her son and go hide under the bed when thunder storms came through. And, in South Georgia, that was a lot of "under the bed time"!! Sort of had her in mind when I wrote it.Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145461503508795412006-04-19T10:45:00.000-05:002006-04-19T10:45:00.000-05:00i met someone the other day that was complaining a...i met someone the other day that was complaining about their new car. he loved the fact it had a sunroof until he discovered the interior of the vehicle practically glows with lightning flashes and he's terrified of lightning.eric l houck jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03751145684916715250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145459291011803382006-04-19T10:08:00.000-05:002006-04-19T10:08:00.000-05:00Pat, I feel like a late comer to the chorus line b...Pat, I feel like a late comer to the chorus line but that was one fine group of metaphores. Great stuff.Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145456581757222592006-04-19T09:23:00.000-05:002006-04-19T09:23:00.000-05:00ohhhh..I like!!ohhhh..I like!!Prishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03970753027686923295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145439638199122552006-04-19T04:40:00.000-05:002006-04-19T04:40:00.000-05:00The end says it all! fantastic metaphors here!love...The end says it all! fantastic metaphors here!<BR/>love it :)Pincushionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064798658006886544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145418069389168462006-04-18T22:41:00.000-05:002006-04-18T22:41:00.000-05:00Fantastic!Fantastic!Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145416701272642052006-04-18T22:18:00.000-05:002006-04-18T22:18:00.000-05:00Promises under the bed, love that.Promises under the bed, love that.Michelle M. Buchananhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18272048344542843224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145415687458961412006-04-18T22:01:00.000-05:002006-04-18T22:01:00.000-05:00great imagesthe whole thing is beautifully put tog...great images<BR/>the whole thing is beautifully put together<BR/>and the ending is a knockout<BR/>thank youflootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145413938742083532006-04-18T21:32:00.000-05:002006-04-18T21:32:00.000-05:00Major lightning tonight here, Pat - I'm about to s...Major lightning tonight here, Pat - I'm about to shut down the computer so it won't get fried! Liked 'promises...made under the bed' in the moments of fear and the jab of lightning at the end.stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10728945613118543383noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145404045784541082006-04-18T18:47:00.000-05:002006-04-18T18:47:00.000-05:00this is excellent. your command of the language - ...this is excellent. your command of the language - "A rainbow<BR/>is the license plate<BR/>of a hit and run storm" - beautiful expressions.Larahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15713578039177037833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1145389817746595272006-04-18T14:50:00.000-05:002006-04-18T14:50:00.000-05:00Love this one, but the ending really packs this on...Love this one, but the ending really packs this one with power.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com