tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post115144980978202498..comments2023-09-25T05:04:32.754-05:00Comments on Laughing Ghosts: Three Haiku/SenyruPat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151908895442738562006-07-03T01:41:00.000-05:002006-07-03T01:41:00.000-05:00Enjoy rereading these. The last one is really cool...Enjoy rereading these. The last one is really cool. The outwardly religious framework (a costly affaire) of the first one seems to me to be its cardinal virtue.:)And, did not know cold beer is a species of song bird. Thinking about it, once you have a couple of them in the drinker, they will surely start to sing. Thanks Pat. It's a rare privilege to be able to laugh seriously.:))Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151586247597570192006-06-29T08:04:00.000-05:002006-06-29T08:04:00.000-05:00very well done.very well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151583906680130792006-06-29T07:25:00.000-05:002006-06-29T07:25:00.000-05:00Thanks everyone!! I'm awed and envious at the prec...Thanks everyone!! I'm awed and envious at the precision which you "writers" of the short poems nail moments like snowflakes and make them hang there without melting. Don, the western haiku does not follow a strict syllable count. As I understand because of the differences in the language. I've said more than my knowledge allows.Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151531921336249372006-06-28T16:58:00.000-05:002006-06-28T16:58:00.000-05:00Must be in the air, or water. I was told to work o...Must be in the air, or water. I was told to work on my 5-7-5 haiku technique. Being a nonconformist, that will be tough.Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151527700357658922006-06-28T15:48:00.000-05:002006-06-28T15:48:00.000-05:00like these, pat... the first one is my favourite, ...like these, pat... the first one is my favourite, too, though i wouldn't object to a glass of beer :)<BR/>if my memory serves me well, i did see a few haiku on your blog some time ago...polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151522940469332492006-06-28T14:29:00.000-05:002006-06-28T14:29:00.000-05:00I like the first the best it made me giggleI like the first the best it made me giggleSue hardy-Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09303253173299793670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151518360712840192006-06-28T13:12:00.000-05:002006-06-28T13:12:00.000-05:00Floots said it for me! *lol*Tks Pat, your poems ne...Floots said it for me! *lol*<BR/>Tks Pat, your poems never fails to provoke, tickle and inspire! Wonderful!Medusa aka expiringpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08766588141026174345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151491001192689312006-06-28T05:36:00.000-05:002006-06-28T05:36:00.000-05:00like 'em(especially the water bill pun)like 'em<BR/>(especially the water bill pun)flootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151475451940721212006-06-28T01:17:00.000-05:002006-06-28T01:17:00.000-05:00the first two were skewed...up in a rhythm to see ...the first two were skewed...up in a rhythm to see a different image in the third line...<BR/>expecting the same, the third one was mischievously different...<BR/>you prompted me to re-read all...<BR/>very well saidAmalenduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06976601329522647463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151459513224919642006-06-27T20:51:00.000-05:002006-06-27T20:51:00.000-05:00very nice.....i didn't know u have a haiku in uvery nice.....<BR/><BR/>i didn't know u have a haiku in uKaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1151457151725731102006-06-27T20:12:00.000-05:002006-06-27T20:12:00.000-05:00Birdsong is a hoot! your native good humor makes ...Birdsong is a hoot! your native good humor makes you a natural for the senyru! Thanks Pat, I enjoyed these very much.Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.com