tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post115490545518223741..comments2023-09-25T05:04:32.754-05:00Comments on Laughing Ghosts: Cyclic ReunionPat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1155004097655019902006-08-07T21:28:00.000-05:002006-08-07T21:28:00.000-05:00Pat, love your concrete and vivid imagery. I mean,...Pat, love your concrete and vivid imagery. I mean, "concrete" as in rock-solid and grounded, not "concrete" as in densely packed around one's ankles before one swims with the fishes.<BR/><BR/>Um, sorry -- saw an episode of the Sopranos last night and it seems to have stuck.<BR/><BR/>Anyway, I do like your writing, and was delighted to see your comment on my cut-out pic. Hope you'll come back soon!Lori Witzelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04744273435691506484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154989128508176412006-08-07T17:18:00.000-05:002006-08-07T17:18:00.000-05:00Steve, it was temporary. But the plant life around...Steve, it was temporary. But the plant life around here loved it.<BR/><BR/>At least I don't look like I stuck my finger in a 220 outlet!! Thank you!!<BR/><BR/>Russell, coming from a chef that sounds good!! Thank you!!<BR/><BR/>Thank you Kai!! She does it to me all the time.<BR/><BR/>Margie, I'm glad you did. I like the rain too.<BR/><BR/>Thanks Borut!!<BR/><BR/>Medusa, thank you!! <BR/><BR/>Silvermoon, yes they do. Thank you!!<BR/><BR/>Dumbdodi, I don't blame you. I don't think I could live in your part of the world. Too dreary. Or that's my impression. Thank you!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks, Plus!! I keep a little muse chained to my desk. She runs away every now and again. She loves beer, she always comes back.<BR/><BR/>MB, thank you!! I think class 4's pretty impressive. Does make a difference when you go over the tattoos. You blew me away with your music. Looking forward to CD information.<BR/><BR/>Thank you Mandy!!<BR/><BR/>Jon, you have a bright future as an artist!! Thank you!!<BR/><BR/>Vaughn, I hope so!!<BR/><BR/>Belinha, thank you coming by!! Apparently, I draw like you write poetry. I love your work. Look forward to seeing more of it!!<BR/><BR/>Polona, you know I love WOW. I'll never tell...<BR/><BR/>Jel, I hope you don't have to wait long.<BR/><BR/>Dustin, thanks!!Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154985490919075072006-08-07T16:18:00.000-05:002006-08-07T16:18:00.000-05:00I'm glad you liked my work-I'm (a little) better i...I'm glad you liked my work-I'm (a little) better in drawing than in writting!!!Seriously:once I wrote a short story that won a prize.One day I will write a book.But never a poetry one!:-)Belinha Fernandeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01002456782459817098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154981574240461452006-08-07T15:12:00.000-05:002006-08-07T15:12:00.000-05:00Glad you got some rain, we are still waiting !Glad you got some rain, we are still waiting !jelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09468151130326112121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154980736206781152006-08-07T14:58:00.000-05:002006-08-07T14:58:00.000-05:00wow! awesome stuff, pat!love salty sweat running l...wow! awesome stuff, pat!<BR/>love salty sweat running like class 5 rapids over butterfly tattoos (and wonder who these belong to :))polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154980189062598882006-08-07T14:49:00.001-05:002006-08-07T14:49:00.001-05:00Ah!I tryed to write some poetry but I was really b...Ah!I tryed to write some poetry but I was really bad...Belinha Fernandeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01002456782459817098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154980148284913352006-08-07T14:49:00.000-05:002006-08-07T14:49:00.000-05:00I like poetry!!!Do you know portuguese poetry?I re...I like poetry!!!Do you know portuguese poetry?I read a few foreign poets like Rimbaud or Keats or Wordsworth a long time ago.Now I hardly read.It's quite a shame...Belinha Fernandeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01002456782459817098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154976053640971812006-08-07T13:40:00.000-05:002006-08-07T13:40:00.000-05:00Ha! ...and you'll soon be writing about a flood. ...Ha! ...and you'll soon be writing about a flood. :-)Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154969023437137152006-08-07T11:43:00.000-05:002006-08-07T11:43:00.000-05:00Love it...Expresses it completely.Love it...Expresses it completely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154962392265541902006-08-07T09:53:00.000-05:002006-08-07T09:53:00.000-05:00Your poem sounds like it feels around here... exce...Your poem sounds like it feels around here... except the rain. Wish we would get some rain!!<BR/><BR/><I>Are rivers of salty sweat<BR/>running like class 5 rapids<BR/>over butterfly tattoos?</I><BR/>Vivid line. I have not run class 5 rapids, but class 4 yes... but not over butterfly tattoos! Yow.<BR/><BR/>Thanks very much for your comment — I loved the word you used!! ;-)MBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14515233228776181123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154962350734369712006-08-07T09:52:00.000-05:002006-08-07T09:52:00.000-05:00Lines 6-8..where did you get all these fascinatin...Lines 6-8..where did you get all these fascinating imagery? These tthree lines made the poem!Plus Ultrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735827112800682222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154954707325128202006-08-07T07:45:00.000-05:002006-08-07T07:45:00.000-05:00Lovely it cooled out for you. But I am not complai...Lovely it cooled out for you. But I am not complaining about any hot weather here in Manchester, it bloody rains here all the time.I am dreading the wintersdumbdodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17058309506504602465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154946433084273652006-08-07T05:27:00.000-05:002006-08-07T05:27:00.000-05:00"Are rivers of salty sweatrunning like class 5 rap..."Are rivers of salty sweat<BR/>running like class 5 rapids"- very descriptive! Questions (esp. browner, drier?) fit well among your cycling.(Ironically, it stormed here last night.) <BR/><BR/>Thx for the kind linkage & your visits. Ironically, I came in here this morning to do the same without knowing you did. GMTA (Great Minds Think Alike) :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154941740496121282006-08-07T04:09:00.000-05:002006-08-07T04:09:00.000-05:00Great ending Pat! :) Hope it cools soon in your pa...Great ending Pat! :) <BR/>Hope it cools soon in your part of the world. It's blistering over here too. Much too hot to consider doing anything else but read poetry in bed!!!Medusa aka expiringpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08766588141026174345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154930798520858552006-08-07T01:06:00.000-05:002006-08-07T01:06:00.000-05:00Oh, good!:) Good poem.Oh, good!:) Good poem.Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154915471017066472006-08-06T20:51:00.000-05:002006-08-06T20:51:00.000-05:00Ilike this poem!Glad it rained!It is raining here ...Ilike this poem!<BR/>Glad it rained!<BR/>It is raining here now!<BR/>Love the rain!Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154913571861418622006-08-06T20:19:00.000-05:002006-08-06T20:19:00.000-05:00thank u...i like ur poem too.aurora stick her tong...thank u...<BR/><BR/>i like ur poem too.<BR/><BR/>aurora stick her tongue at me...Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154912679433667542006-08-06T20:04:00.000-05:002006-08-06T20:04:00.000-05:00Oh Pat, That was very, very nice! I loved the ton...Oh Pat, That was very, very nice! I loved the tone, but the palpable hesitation was delicious.Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154912254651273362006-08-06T19:57:00.000-05:002006-08-06T19:57:00.000-05:00You're such an alarmist.Good poem, though. :):):)You're such an alarmist.<BR/><BR/>Good poem, though. :):):)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-1154912082215129262006-08-06T19:54:00.000-05:002006-08-06T19:54:00.000-05:00Relief at last!!Relief at last!!stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10728945613118543383noreply@blogger.com