tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post3167819729543024778..comments2023-09-25T05:04:32.754-05:00Comments on Laughing Ghosts: School Of ThoughtsPat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-59053782691712417392007-03-19T23:15:00.000-05:002007-03-19T23:15:00.000-05:00The imagery makes me homesick. LOL, I could almost...The imagery makes me homesick. LOL, I could almost smell low tide. Very nice PatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-85629438916903566662007-03-19T10:19:00.000-05:002007-03-19T10:19:00.000-05:00good job.good job.bre31https://www.blogger.com/profile/13091884081535427945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-77782038058682686452007-03-17T14:17:00.000-05:002007-03-17T14:17:00.000-05:00I'm glad our thoughts don't have to go to school, ...I'm glad our thoughts don't have to go to school, mine mostly used to lurk in the playground outside. I think there mabe another poem their if I can borrow the title Pat?<BR/><BR/>Love this: are porgies a type of fish then?Sue hardy-Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09303253173299793670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-77926066029976003552007-03-14T20:47:00.000-05:002007-03-14T20:47:00.000-05:00All I can say is "Wow".All I can say is "Wow".Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-16208738952602207542007-03-14T11:14:00.000-05:002007-03-14T11:14:00.000-05:00"...school of porgies.."Ah..."...school of porgies.."<BR/><BR/>Ah...gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-61096638118233688702007-03-13T10:58:00.000-05:002007-03-13T10:58:00.000-05:00A corgie/porpoise mix? ... not to mention there's ...A corgie/porpoise mix? ... not to mention there's something called a dogfish!MBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14515233228776181123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-15593219335996101972007-03-13T10:15:00.000-05:002007-03-13T10:15:00.000-05:00MB, I like what you thought it was better.MB, I like what you thought it was better.Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-54472341766761199482007-03-13T10:10:00.000-05:002007-03-13T10:10:00.000-05:00Now that I know what a porgie is... I like this. I...Now that I know what a porgie is... I like this. I think I've seen porgies in action, or at least something like them, and it's an apt comparison.MBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14515233228776181123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-39225607377181755282007-03-13T09:39:00.000-05:002007-03-13T09:39:00.000-05:00Thank you Kai!!Russell, or real low. Thanks!!Floot...Thank you Kai!!<BR/><BR/>Russell, or real low. Thanks!!<BR/><BR/>Floots I can't speak for your flexibility, but mine left along time ago. Thanks!!<BR/><BR/>Porgies. They're a salt water bait fish that school and when being chased really rip through the surface of the water.<BR/><BR/>Thanks Janice!!<BR/><BR/>Polona, Thank you. I think I'm missing the pivot.<BR/><BR/>Thanks Katie!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks UB!!<BR/><BR/>Gracie, I guess it's a normal human condition. Thanks!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks Margie, just speaking the truth.<BR/><BR/>Borut, my thoughts are too unruly to school.<BR/><BR/>Thanks Trinitystar!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks Corey!!<BR/><BR/>Pris, I'm not sure I do. Thank you!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks Lyrically Speaking!! I do better with shorter pieces.<BR/><BR/>Sage, growing up on the coast of Georgia, know exactly what you're talking about. Thanks!!Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-90451944934118871292007-03-13T09:01:00.000-05:002007-03-13T09:01:00.000-05:00good images as always--low tide means mud--but als...good images as always--low tide means mud--but also the time for oysters and floundering.sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-27959516329128731022007-03-13T08:39:00.000-05:002007-03-13T08:39:00.000-05:00I love the title of this piece and how you kept it...I love the title of this piece and how you kept it shortLyrically speakinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07695704757793935348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-80959020858898944992007-03-13T08:33:00.000-05:002007-03-13T08:33:00.000-05:00Now I'd like to see the inside of YOUR brain, Pat ...Now I'd like to see the inside of YOUR brain, Pat :-)(and yes, excellent tanka)Prishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03970753027686923295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-56791445957669712692007-03-13T07:34:00.000-05:002007-03-13T07:34:00.000-05:00even at low tide you bring waves of goodness.even at low tide you bring waves of goodness.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-71986532983497156402007-03-13T04:43:00.000-05:002007-03-13T04:43:00.000-05:00great train of thoughts put into words. :o)great train of thoughts put into words. :o)trinitystarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18134309193793933391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-76191649358290459712007-03-13T03:37:00.000-05:002007-03-13T03:37:00.000-05:00Schooling your thoughs!?:) A great idea!:)Schooling your thoughs!?:) A great idea!:)Boruthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-29293682519373062412007-03-13T00:09:00.000-05:002007-03-13T00:09:00.000-05:00Very good one Pat!I enjoyed it very much!Oh, your ...Very good one Pat!<BR/>I enjoyed it very much!<BR/><BR/>Oh, your comment today was so nice....thanks so very much!<BR/>I like the poet in you too!<BR/>Your poems are simply...<I>The Best!</I>Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-75360473971869676302007-03-12T20:58:00.000-05:002007-03-12T20:58:00.000-05:00yep, my brain does that too... great way of descri...yep, my brain does that too... great way of describing it!graciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10548850042428168033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-17372549981339384932007-03-12T19:23:00.000-05:002007-03-12T19:23:00.000-05:00what a clever poem! I love it! =)what a clever poem! I love it! =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-34945047931513842212007-03-12T15:58:00.000-05:002007-03-12T15:58:00.000-05:00that's an excellent tanka, pat! :)that's an excellent tanka, pat! :)polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-15644216891228916242007-03-12T14:05:00.000-05:002007-03-12T14:05:00.000-05:00Good one Pat!...love the imageryGood one Pat!...love the imageryJanice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-53090651620120044732007-03-12T13:33:00.000-05:002007-03-12T13:33:00.000-05:00a school of what??a school of what??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-83199567877594109412007-03-12T13:25:00.000-05:002007-03-12T13:25:00.000-05:00nice idea patwish i had that sort of flexibility ...nice idea pat<BR/>wish i had that sort of flexibility :)flootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-85875500879998774862007-03-12T12:29:00.000-05:002007-03-12T12:29:00.000-05:00Low tide moments can be real peaceful. Good one P...Low tide moments can be real peaceful. Good one Pat!Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-58007624013587556362007-03-12T12:01:00.000-05:002007-03-12T12:01:00.000-05:00nicee....nicee....Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.com