tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post4439123822677012193..comments2008-03-01T18:06:45.431-05:00Pat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-24195122048518836182008-03-01T18:06:00.000-05:002008-03-01T18:06:00.000-05:002008-03-01T18:06:00.000-05:00This is one of my favorite poems of yours! I can see it being published. This is the kind of thing one would read on the NY Subway on "Poets in Motion".<BR/><BR/>My favorite line is "Noah's ghost."<BR/><BR/>Kudos!EATING POETRYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00043291161041330923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-2580100765554088102008-02-27T00:38:00.000-05:002008-02-27T00:38:00.000-05:002008-02-27T00:38:00.000-05:00Love the images. Especially how the trees shook.Rethabilehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-17047516182647511512008-02-26T19:39:00.000-05:002008-02-26T19:39:00.000-05:002008-02-26T19:39:00.000-05:00Congratulations, I know the rain had to have been a real relief! Just after you left your comment on my poem saying how dry it was out your way, we had rain here for the first time this winter. It was a pleasant, spring-like soak, which had such a hopefull quality. After that, however, it dropped six inches of snow for the rest of the day.Russell Ragsdalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-85014304091375048912008-02-26T11:57:00.000-05:002008-02-26T11:57:00.000-05:002008-02-26T11:57:00.000-05:00I like this, Pat!Prishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03970753027686923295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-50580486139379331542008-02-25T18:45:00.000-05:002008-02-25T18:45:00.000-05:002008-02-25T18:45:00.000-05:00I feel like splashing into a muddy puddle...wat fun!tHe_NeW_cYnIchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02225452291299150178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-47460513029236202362008-02-25T00:21:00.000-05:002008-02-25T00:21:00.000-05:002008-02-25T00:21:00.000-05:00This is <B>absolutely</B> marvelous!<BR/> <BR/>How <B>wonderfully</B> written this is. <BR/><BR/>Thank you.Queen Neeteehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10022172941959946854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-44959197550802087332008-02-24T20:59:00.000-05:002008-02-24T20:59:00.000-05:002008-02-24T20:59:00.000-05:00a juicy one..., the wet rags of clouds and the shaking of wet dogs..... love the imagery pat !!NINANINAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12033392452482081322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-6101846755898018452008-02-24T16:53:00.000-05:002008-02-24T16:53:00.000-05:002008-02-24T16:53:00.000-05:00gosh you sum up heavy rain well in this one!Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-64331660970672282002008-02-23T21:44:00.000-05:002008-02-23T21:44:00.000-05:002008-02-23T21:44:00.000-05:00Good one--sounds like ya'll getting some well needed rain, or is this just what you're hoping for?sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-18686204781189113622008-02-23T20:14:00.000-05:002008-02-23T20:14:00.000-05:002008-02-23T20:14:00.000-05:00Each line overflowing... this is a bonus read!Masagohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-79116417906323062072008-02-23T10:06:00.000-05:002008-02-23T10:06:00.000-05:002008-02-23T10:06:00.000-05:00You never disappoint, Pat!gautami tripathyhttp://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-85993344793237088362008-02-23T07:17:00.000-05:002008-02-23T07:17:00.000-05:002008-02-23T07:17:00.000-05:00lol... I enjoyed this Pat! Thank you!Katie McKennahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06042460109308890090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-69276723450395842332008-02-23T00:24:00.000-05:002008-02-23T00:24:00.000-05:002008-02-23T00:24:00.000-05:00Wonderful Pat. Loved the part about "Noah's ghost" This left me with knowing the true meaning of being drenched though and through. <BR/>Excellent poetry. Thank you!boulieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05603633911595032921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-86834428681560646762008-02-22T17:44:00.000-05:002008-02-22T17:44:00.000-05:002008-02-22T17:44:00.000-05:00Great last image, Pat, winds it up very effectively.Billhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-65451438523071387972008-02-22T17:26:00.000-05:002008-02-22T17:26:00.000-05:002008-02-22T17:26:00.000-05:00Enjoyed this poem, Pat.Don Iannonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-19555984812066060652008-02-22T16:17:00.000-05:002008-02-22T16:17:00.000-05:002008-02-22T16:17:00.000-05:00this sounds like the rain was as refreshing as your poem.<BR/>excellent!polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-91124590683578887262008-02-22T12:21:00.000-05:002008-02-22T12:21:00.000-05:002008-02-22T12:21:00.000-05:00So glad Pat you finally got a good rain in your area.<BR/>I love that last verse!Janice Thomsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-84125983127038927732008-02-22T11:05:00.000-05:002008-02-22T11:05:00.000-05:002008-02-22T11:05:00.000-05:00It's about time that you got some good rain! Glad you got it.J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-58266761779924615562008-02-22T10:20:00.000-05:002008-02-22T10:20:00.000-05:002008-02-22T10:20:00.000-05:00AWESOME!jelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09468151130326112121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-11754751805391026362008-02-22T09:02:00.000-05:002008-02-22T09:02:00.000-05:002008-02-22T09:02:00.000-05:00Wonderful imagery, Pat!<BR/>I really enjoyed this one!<BR/>Thank you<BR/><BR/>MargieMargiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-18734251619566250712008-02-22T08:51:00.000-05:002008-02-22T08:51:00.000-05:002008-02-22T08:51:00.000-05:00great write pat<BR/>especially love that third stanza<BR/>that's just the way it's been here<BR/>cheersflootshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.com