tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post4970268716797064839..comments2023-09-25T05:04:32.754-05:00Comments on Laughing Ghosts: A Song Too FarPat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-91081919279344986892008-04-02T01:51:00.000-05:002008-04-02T01:51:00.000-05:00This whole beautiful poem is first set sail by you...This whole beautiful poem is first set sail by your great title. The rest slid in and around my minds eye ever so smoothly. <BR/><BR/>Wonderful, Pat! <BR/>Thank you!Elena Horowitz-Brookeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05603633911595032921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-74926470829058004152008-04-01T21:38:00.000-05:002008-04-01T21:38:00.000-05:00Wow, incredible.Wow, incredible.Masagohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12739811491183011023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-56015411711347645072008-04-01T10:11:00.000-05:002008-04-01T10:11:00.000-05:00Almost reaches the out of reach.Almost reaches the out of reach.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-91607764648659261502008-03-31T23:55:00.000-05:002008-03-31T23:55:00.000-05:00this is beautiful!(A mocking bird's songskips like...this is beautiful!<BR/>(A mocking bird's song<BR/>skips like smooth stone-notes<BR/>across the lake<BR/>in a descending breezy scale-<BR/>this is my favorite part)J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-9775396738893422992008-03-31T22:18:00.000-05:002008-03-31T22:18:00.000-05:00Beautiful Pat - as always your imagery stays in my...Beautiful Pat - as always your imagery stays in my mind for hoursJanice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-20785169495016006432008-03-31T16:24:00.000-05:002008-03-31T16:24:00.000-05:00:):)Kaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-90275616539960135702008-03-31T02:45:00.000-05:002008-03-31T02:45:00.000-05:00wonderfully hypnoticthanks patwonderfully hypnotic<BR/>thanks patflootshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01530734765701940680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-67391452815687366952008-03-30T15:41:00.000-05:002008-03-30T15:41:00.000-05:00I love the whole idea of your poem and how you gav...I love the whole idea of your poem and how you gave it structure; the images put me right there in your mind as you saw it. So very, well crafted! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-14572406517682197652008-03-30T14:27:00.000-05:002008-03-30T14:27:00.000-05:00BittersweetjanBittersweet<BR/><BR/><BR/>janAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-44994606268396033582008-03-30T13:49:00.000-05:002008-03-30T13:49:00.000-05:00wow! i know the feeling...wow! <BR/>i know the feeling...polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21779111.post-29120604512885897332008-03-30T10:30:00.000-05:002008-03-30T10:30:00.000-05:00I like the alliteration in the last stanza.Whistle...I like the alliteration in the last stanza.<BR/><BR/>Whistled seductions...<BR/><BR/>Ah!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com