The Sun fell from the sky two days ago
I thought he would bounce several times,
maybe longer; all balls bounce even low on air.
Instead, he formed into a spirit with a white straw hat,
and slipped quietly through the air conditioner vents,
and ceiling tiles until he reached the roof:
a last look at the construction next door,
the tears, the folded hands and sighs.
He hopped on the back of a saddled prayer,
rode due West to the edge of the world,
turned, and left the sunset as goodbye.
for Benny
goodbye my friend goodbye.
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so much sadness and love in here pat
a beautiful farewell
I'm sorry to hear that !
Very moving Pat - a beautifully written goodbye.
Awesome. The friendship shines through.
Indeed a beautiful goodbye. So much said here. All the best, Don
Beautiful Pat. I'm sure he hears your message of love. The power of your friendship is felt in your words.
a wonderful and moving farewell...
the sun is a constant shapeshifter.... this poem is thought provoking :)
beautiful, with a tinge of sadness
that was very touching.
We never want to believe a dear friend is mortal. Friendship is immortal though. loss of a friend is never easy. Your beautiful words are a wonderful tribute to Bennie and the friendship you shared that will go on until you see him again.
Pat, is it anyone I know?
Lainey
Thought provoking poem ... farewell to the physical presence ... yet, always in your heart.
The sun will rise for rebirth.
Hugs for you.
powerful. very moving poem.
So beautiful despite the sadness!
Beautiful and sad. I can feel the love that you carry.
T
A beautiful tribute for your friend. May his soul rest in peace.
Painfully moving, Pat.
Your loving words fall effortlessly unlike what I imagine to be the heaviness in your heart.
Condolences upon the death of your friend Benny.
A beautiful tribute to our wonderful friend...I'll never look at a sunset the same way after reading your words..
LA
omg, you just made me burst into tears. I don't think I've ever read anything so beautifully written or so sad and final. I don't know what to say, it's taken me by surprise.. bye
4 now.. and I'm so sorry for your loss..
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