Adrift in MySpace
where distance has evolved into sacred chambers,
hidden places,
and thoughts adorn silicon-chip walls,
as photographs,
skewed from whispers of illusory digital mache.
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26 comments:
and I thought they were just digital pictures on a webpage...
Great poetry Pat.
Tom
and these chambers mean a way of life to so many...
Does this mean that we are creating a world of people distant from the human touch? I think so.
You have a wonderful way of just laying it out Pat. It is wonderful to read and feel.
T
very amusing. :-)
too much cyber contact methinks; but not a bad thing
NINA
I am impressed, Pat!
nice description of "internet hell"
Oh good one Pat! :)
indeed!
MySpace
I keep
MyDistance
Beautifully done.
scared chambers or sacred chambers?
--works either way--
(by the way, I just visited mySpace for the first time today, hadn't even read your post yet!)
and these walls of pages tell too much.
MySpace is depressing to me.
See but don't feel and feel but don't touch - the fatal flaw for truely humanizing the internet, nice one Pat!
And I assume youn have a MySpace page...What is your address, Pat? Too funny. Many people live in the MySpace world you know...
I enjoyed reading yourspace ..sweet
Nasra
:) think I'll stay in blogspot.
lol.... I am not on MySpace... but sometimes I do wonder.. Thanks Pat!
Pat, it's time to hear from you! You've been on my mind. :)
i will stick to Blogger.:)
How could I forget to wish you a happy birthday!?
Well, Happy belated one...
I am missing your work Pat. Please let us not hunger much longer....smiles.
T
Where have you gone, Pat?
amazing what you can fit itto one microchip of imformation! so much blah blsh blah yet so many opportunities.
humph I have been outta commission, buying a new puter next week. I think myspcace gave me a virus:)
flying by and leaving a few bits
hope you are doing well
my wrting pretty much evaporated
but I hope it returns
and yours too
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