Friday, April 11, 2008

MySpace

Adrift in MySpace
where distance has evolved into sacred chambers,
hidden places,
and thoughts adorn silicon-chip walls,
as photographs,
skewed from whispers of illusory digital mache.

26 comments:

Tom said...

and I thought they were just digital pictures on a webpage...

Great poetry Pat.
Tom

polona said...

and these chambers mean a way of life to so many...

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

Does this mean that we are creating a world of people distant from the human touch? I think so.

You have a wonderful way of just laying it out Pat. It is wonderful to read and feel.

T

Masago said...

very amusing. :-)

Anonymous said...

too much cyber contact methinks; but not a bad thing
NINA

Anonymous said...

I am impressed, Pat!

sage said...

nice description of "internet hell"

Janice Thomson said...

Oh good one Pat! :)

Kai said...

indeed!

Bill said...

MySpace
I keep
MyDistance

Marc said...

Beautifully done.

Yes said...

scared chambers or sacred chambers?
--works either way--
(by the way, I just visited mySpace for the first time today, hadn't even read your post yet!)

trinitystar said...

and these walls of pages tell too much.

C... said...

MySpace is depressing to me.

Russell Ragsdale said...

See but don't feel and feel but don't touch - the fatal flaw for truely humanizing the internet, nice one Pat!

Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

And I assume youn have a MySpace page...What is your address, Pat? Too funny. Many people live in the MySpace world you know...

Anonymous said...

I enjoyed reading yourspace ..sweet

Nasra

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

:) think I'll stay in blogspot.

Katie McKenna said...

lol.... I am not on MySpace... but sometimes I do wonder.. Thanks Pat!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

Pat, it's time to hear from you! You've been on my mind. :)

dsnake1 said...

i will stick to Blogger.:)

Rethabile said...

How could I forget to wish you a happy birthday!?

Well, Happy belated one...

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

I am missing your work Pat. Please let us not hunger much longer....smiles.

T

Anonymous said...

Where have you gone, Pat?

NINANINA said...

amazing what you can fit itto one microchip of imformation! so much blah blsh blah yet so many opportunities.
humph I have been outta commission, buying a new puter next week. I think myspcace gave me a virus:)

steve said...

flying by and leaving a few bits
hope you are doing well
my wrting pretty much evaporated
but I hope it returns
and yours too