I was recently in a head-on collision
with a Mac-Attack.
The sesame seed metallic hood
crumpled under the force
of my pearly white grill.
The double beef passengers
left this world
through the tunnel of appetite satisfaction.
A memorial service
was held in a chapel of grease;
their names recorded
in the book of my blood.
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oh! the HORROR :o<
and then a burial at sea?
Deeply touching, Pat
The first of such poetry I read here...I feel sad, reading the last stanza..Shucks! I feel bad myself!
Hope to see some cheering verse soon...
wishes,
devika
Oh, I swear, Pat--I was in shock thinking you were in a fatal SUV crash, slowly it dawned on me...
probably at the word "appetite"--
anyway, not to mourn--they were long dead before your encounter!
(You are TOO clever!)
just be carerful you don't collide with too many of their breed! better take care of the cholesterol levels and stuff...
great stuff as always!
Too good!
Margie:)
Oy, such graphics. :-)
this could have gone in so many directions- glad you took this one. :)
i got scared reading it....but finally it hit me...lolz!
u r crazy!!! :)
Choice words. :o)
Very creative! I about busted my gut laughing
:D
clever!
After reading this, I feel I need to have my cholesterol checked.
Good one Pat - a clever poem on the perils of fast foods :)
Hope you don't mind me reading your blog... I like some of the posts quite a lot, still reading... :)
Greetings – Interesting site you’ve created! I came by to say hi …and to invite you to stop by Image & Verse for a visit, or just to say hello.
…rob
lmao.... too funny and ever so clever!
hey I like the new picture- the dog makes you look better :)
What an eloquent way to end the life of a greasy BMac! ~ may it rest happily in pieces hahah ...Go whole wheat & lessen the visits to the golden arches, Mr Paulk, it will do you a world of good! :D I'm a fan of your writing, sir... would you mind if I included you in my blogroll? If you're cool with a link exchange, let me know :) Cheers!
Pat, I've missed you. I've missed your poetry. I'll be back more often!
I hope this did not really happen - you have such a vivid way of putting words together.
You can find more here.
Haiku Poems
hey, this is March--are you not blogging anymore?
Mac Attack
are you sure that's ketchup
on your chin
Since my computer crashed and I now have a MAC instead of a pc, I almost forgot about the "big mac" hamburger until I kept reading.
Wonderful and now I'm hungry!
Your grin towards life is contagous, glad I came for a read.
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