The one hates the other,
the other is playful and young;
neither of these “anywhere-on-the-carpet”
dog food re-processors is house broken.
The first, was a male Australian Shepard,
street trained, between one and two,
or seven and fourteen in canine math.
The second, a male black cocker with
a schnauzer nose, cuddly, cute
and quick as a blast of back-fire smoke
when escaping the Shepard’s snout.
The younger came without his manhood,
the Aussie’s are intact for another week. But,
even without his testosterone birthrights,
I’m afraid he’ll always piss-out yellow post-its
telling the cocker to get out of his house.
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19 comments:
glad to be back here... although its been a really long time... nice poem this... liked the hard-hitting style...something u seem to have perfected!!
would be glad to see at my blog sometime!!
so that's what's been keeping you away from blogging...
good to see you back!
Those are some pretty emphatic notes!! Chemistry on the carpet...sounds like quite a pair there!
sounds like my children! :)
Some gems here: "dog food pre-processors" and "piss-out yellow post-its".
I have an aussie mix who is now without his manhood, but who still wants to mark his territory... good poem and good luck with the dogs!
Yikes......sounds like my son's house, they got a new dog who uses the living room carpet as a potty.......in fact he think that is the best place, even better than the outside. haha
Lou was an Australian sheppard.....I still miss him like crazy. But he NEVER pooped.......very shy......
Pat, what can I say? Life is goin' to the dogs. Nice write. Or, how about those dog days of summer in Atlanta.
loved it ... enjoyed it... fantastic desriptive words
i dont have a dog but could feel wht it means to have one ... and u have two ....
alok
I always wondered how my dog manages to mark 6 or 7 bushes when on a walk and still have enough to do the hedge at home too lol. Loved your imagery Pat.
dogs ! how can we live without them ? I can't live without mine. she's been a trip, cos she is a hybrid coyote. I have no carpets left...I love the yellow post its ... great way of saying "I WAS HERE"
glad to visit you! I finally got my camera goin'.........NINA
remind me never to come and stay - i'm still attached to my "bits" :)
Another lovely poem in your usual style, provoking thoghts about things we take for granted, how many dogs do you have, I wonder
that's why you are too busy these days? :)
good luck with them! :)
Canine creativity - I like.
What a great doggy poem. Very vivid images. And feelings too.
Go Aussie go! ;-)
ha ha!!! I have chewers! :) The latest adopted marmaduke chews anything..the earlier pup loves plastic!
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