I know I promised
to mop the kitchen floor.
I said I would,
I will, I will…
after I walk,
after I nap—
and anything else I think of.
If there’s time leftover
I’ll push and pull,
rinse and wring,
you have my word on it.
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boy do i identify :)
cheers
Love this one, Pat!
And, whatever you do...
don't forget that promise!
I know it will be most appreciated!
Wonderful reading!!!
Margie
procastination...thy name is human!
LOL!
I just came back to mention that I am still waiting for my hubby to put a new garbage disposal that he promised he would put in a month ago...maybe soon...I can always hope!
Margie
i've made a few promises like that!
Brillianter!
this sounds SO like me :-)
love it!
Oh this hits home!
"...and anything else I think of."
Rings true around the world!
a man that mops the floor!! nice!
ua man that mops the floor!! nice!
I've made plenty of those promises. :)
Most poets are part gypsy. If you need a reason to avoid certain things in your life (and we all do), then credit the gypsy within.
love it! it makes me smile. :o)
Agreed!
I can identify too!
P.S. Just wondering who you are promising. :-)
um hmmmm
Not me anymore. Thanks Floots!!
Margie, I was only 2 days late, but it is done!! Thank you!!
Gautami, you are right!! But I did it!!
Sage, I make them all the time. And, usually I end up doing them, usually...
Polona, you mean it's not just a "man" thing??? Thank you!!
Richard, I don't think that's in Webster's but I'll take it!! I love your last haiku.
MB, not you too. This is more universal than I thought. could be an epidemic!!
Steve, I believe it does.
Urban Butterfly, I do dishes too!! Not much on windows, though.
Andrew, you change diapers, you'll do anything. By the way I did that too.
And I thought it was pure laziness. Glad to have something to replace that with. Thanks Don!!
Trinitystar, always glad to bring a smile!!
Joyce, agreed!!
Vaughn, the lady I live with, so I don't end up living in the woods with the hawk!! Oh, I mopped the bathrooms too. I should be good for a couple of weeks now.
Mandy, you've forgotten Saturdays in Fernandina--cleaning day??
truthful....
Always a hint of teasing...
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