Sunday, February 05, 2006

Less Said

Her heels,
advertised
to my attentive ears,
to check out
how good her ass displayed
in tight,
Made in Mexico jeans.

I obliged, and
discovered,
she needed shoes
with quieter heels!

13 comments:

ardi k said...

Yeah, sometimes the thought scene in sound is better than the view. Your words say it all.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

something to think about --- :)

Eric said...

sometimes the fantasy is better than the real thing . . .

Pat Paulk said...

Yes, unfortunately so.

Aurora said...

She probably went home and wrote a poem about your beer belly......:)

Pat Paulk said...

I could've been much, much, more descriptive about why she shouldn't wear TIGHT jeans!

Eric said...

do they make high heel shoes with different load-carrying capacities?

Pat Paulk said...

Too funny!!!!!!!!!!! I think they must!

Christine Klocek-Lim said...

Ohmigosh! I did not expect the ending. Still laughing here. . .

ulrike gerbig said...

i like this poem!

u.

Pat Paulk said...

Thanks Christine and Ulrike. Another Sunday afternoon trip to the grocery store.

Aurora said...

They're going to bar you from the local Piggly Wiggly.

Pat Paulk said...

Yeah, that already happened, that's why I go to Publix now!