gray Winter clouds,
intermittent blue sky—
our love
sagging power lines
miles of bending poles—
too many neighbors
yellow-face moon,
contrail scars—
passengers debark
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- Pat Paulk
- 2009! 57 years ago in April I was a 2# squealing baby boy. Got a wonderful tan in an incubator. Made friends with plastic tubing, needles and tape. All of which I have zero recollection. I've been well watered and fertilized over the years, and grown quite ripe. Plastic tubing, needles and tape are catalysts for flashbacks without the buzz. Enjoy!
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8 comments:
You've got the aha factor going on.:)
I like them...I think you do a good job w/ haikus...1st and last are my favorite
the first is really good!
These feel real to me. Love isn't all sunsets and flowers, but the occasional blue sky is fabulous when it happens. Ditto on the others. The power-lines one is especially true. . .
Thanks to all!!
Wow. Great from start to finish. Nice touches make for solid writing. You've got very nice touches.
oh wow. i have been negligent reading my favorite blogs. what a pleasant surprise . . .
Thanks Eric and Nick. Haiku is contagious!
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