Silence draped the night air
like a satin gown flowing
over moonstone slippers
stepping on the cracks of a ruffled sea.
It was formal and eloquent,
articulate in whispering soundless words,
definitions beyond meaning, expressions
tangled like tongues in a midnight kiss.
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A special moment...how better could it be expressed?
catching up again.
Cool stuff.
I like coming to read your stuff, I ought to get by more often...
but i'm lazy...
:)
mmmm i've gone all shivery :)
good write
Very special indeed. Great write and read, Pat.
wonderful stuff, pat!
This one is full of southern charm! Delightful!
ooooh, this is good!
Cinderalla knew her prince didn't she?
Lushious Pat!
tangled like tongues in a midnight kiss.
wonderful words ... mmmmmmm
Oh Pat this is so beautiful...I read it over and over again...
"articulate in whispering soundless words.."
What a great line...
the gulf does fill the soul. don't spill a single drop and sip the memories when needed.
beautiful
Ohhhh sensual!
I liked this one, but it is the last line that I like the best, "expressions tangled like tongues in a midnight kiss"
Very seductive.
beautiful ending. breathtaking!
As always beautiful! It's good to catch up with your poems Pat.
mmm very sexy and beautiful!
My favourite verse?
"Articulate in whispering soundless words"
Thanks Vaughn!!
Thanks Inconsequential!! glad you stopped back by.
Floots, I think that's because of all those bare legs you've been showing. Thanks!!
Thanks Don!!
Thanks Polona!!
Ahh Cathy, southern charm is my speciality!!
Thanks Andrew!!
Corey, you know she did!!
Thank you Trinitystar!!
Thanks Janice, over and over again!!!
Thanks Gautami!! Silence is a wonderful conversation to listen to.
Thanks Lainey!!
Pris, it sure seemed that way.
Inside our hands, thanks for coming by and commenting!!
Thanks Rax!!
Sage, welcome back!!
Thanks Katie!!
Thanks Rethabile!!!
mmmm my nipples got all tingly...
beautiful eloquent, sensual......and then someone is banging on the door, yelling, hey, Mom you in there.......open up.
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