Monday, June 04, 2007

Naked Beauties

I dog-ear waterfalls,
like memory pages
in God’s premier issue
of all time naked beauties.
Their roaring words slam
onto indifferent rock ears,
tangling strands
of green and white,
always flowing,
always pulling me
into the never ending
wetness of a first love

17 comments:

floots said...

oh yes :)

polona said...

dog-eared waterfalls... wow!

tongue in cheek said...

pure liquid silk.
I think you can put this one under the red tack.

Don Iannone said...

Your unique vantage point of life bleeds through this poem. You defy the epxected in your word choice. And, that's a compliment.

trinitystar said...

Their roaring words slam
onto indifferent rock ears,
tangling strands
of green and white,

Just how it is. Great imagery in your words. Wizard!

lainey said...

DAMN SEXY POEM!

Neva said...

Beautiful poetry. My day is better for having visited here.

Peace
neva

Masago said...

MY!!!

gel(emerald eyes) said...

yep! :)
love "I dog-ear waterfalls/
like memory pages"

(P.S. Please forgive me PP, for not visiting more often. Real life has been more of the usual challenge, but my husband is on the mend.)

Katie McKenna said...

mmm yesss....I so like this.... great imagery ....

dsnake1 said...

took my breath away..

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

ah, the first love -- I miss that...

Janice Thomson said...

How absolutely spot on Pat...and such delicious imagery.

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Ah I remember it so well, now romance competes with rap music and a house full of teenagers

Carol said...

Wow!

gautami tripathy said...

I would say more like liquid oxygen! Aha..

Pat Paulk said...

I have a hit and miss internet connection down here on the beach in southern alabama. I've typed my thank yous 3 times and lost them. So I'll quickly say thanks before I make it a fourth. Thank you all!!