Monday morning,
shower heads weep,
hair dryers howl,
deodorants stifle,
zippers clench teeth,
lip glosses smack,
perfumes choke,
ties hang,
front doors bang,
cars growl,
economic forecast, good.
Originals are better than remakes.
About Me
- Pat Paulk
- 2009! 57 years ago in April I was a 2# squealing baby boy. Got a wonderful tan in an incubator. Made friends with plastic tubing, needles and tape. All of which I have zero recollection. I've been well watered and fertilized over the years, and grown quite ripe. Plastic tubing, needles and tape are catalysts for flashbacks without the buzz. Enjoy!
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18 comments:
Brought a very much needed smile since it's Monday morning.
Very good!
I am not going to bang the front
door though... my cat would not
like it!
I take it you are feeling a bit piled up in American consumerism. I'm kind of out of the loop. You made me feel greatful!
PS my word verificatrion was enertno. Somehow that just seemed appropriate.
Great word economy! Why not, I envy you.:)
Wow!
What a great poem.
This is a snappy little poem!
Kinda sums it up this morning.
good one
makes me grateful
for early retirement
(jury still out on no salary) :)
hey pat....
thanks...
how was ur weekend?
Oh I like!! I also very much like the one below, but you have 31 replies already, so I'll say it here.
The economic forcast as a moment in a series of events, unsincere, much less so than say, drying the hair or shutting a door, and much harder to quantify, indeed.
sums up monday mornings well.
love the poem!
Well put - and such an economy of words. I like it!
Sums up my weekday whirlwind chaos totally!
Lovely poem. And thanks for the heartening words at the end.
Have also read your last few poems. I will surely be visiting again.
tatzgvq
Thanks Don!! Mondays always need a smile!!
Thanks Samuru!! My cat wouldn't like it either.
Russell just the crazy way my brain worked yesterday. Someone should come up with a dictionary for word verification words.
Thanks Borut!
Thank you Mikaelah!!
Thanks Joyce!!
Did mine Vaughn!!
Floots you're a lucky man. Let me know how "no salary" works.
Thanks Kai!! It was way toooooo short!!
Thanks Pris!! I'm happy to pick your comments up whereever you leave them!
Ryan, economists are right almost as often as weathermen. Thanks!!
Polona, kind of hits Tuesdays thru Fridays too. Thank you!!
Pauline, thanks for coming by and commenting!
Thanks Medusa!!
Roger, thank you!! Will appreciate your visits!!
Only in my bones Lee, only in the bones!!
monday morning coming down.......:)
Nea, that sounds like a Johnny Cash/Kris Kristoferson(sp)song.
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