Friday, July 28, 2006

Laundry Note

I put my heart in your laundry,
please wash and gently dry.
Hang it in your closet,
like a favorite blouse
you can’t wear enough.

23 comments:

Poetry by Kai said...

very cute...

samuru999 said...

I do like this poem very much!
Sweet!!!

Aurora said...

Slave driver, forcing your muse to turn out gem after gem like this regularly.:)

Don Iannone said...

I have to agree with Aurora on this one. Good one!

MB said...

This is a really nice one. Very effective.

(Yes, that's what I meant — many kinds of love. It's great fun to see you explore that.)

J.B. Rowell said...

delicate yet comfortable love

nice!

polona said...

gorgeous! love it!!

Osquer said...

Thanks for the warm fuzzy, Pat!

Russell Ragsdale said...

You set it up and then, always right at the end, do it to a turn (or turn it to a do - I'm a little unclear on this at the moment). Anyway, can I visit your factory? This is really nice Pat!

Cathy said...

and wash on the delicate cycle.

Have a great weekend, poet.

Masago said...

Yeah, sweet.

Nea said...

The true essense of comfort within love. To me this is the pinacle of true love, being comfortable.

floots said...

love this
(i'm a softy at heart - got a soppy sonnet on the pre-release shelf)
you have a laundry theme at present
don't tell the therapist about
the stains :)

cheers

GEL said...

The romantic in me loves this.

peter said...

good Pat!!!

whitney said...

this is cute.

Jon Cox said...

Hehehe, thats really good! :o)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

The more I read it, the more I liked it. Well done.

dsnake1 said...

tender little poem, pat.
enjoyed it.

Pat Paulk said...

Thank you Kai!!

Margie, thought you might!! Thank you!!

Speaking of said muse, have you seen her???

Thanks Don!!

MB, I love exploring!! thank you!!

Julia, thank you!!

Thanks Polona!! Now if I can just remember who's laundry basket I put that in...

My pleasure Osquer!!

Beer Russell, lots of beer!!!

Thank you Cathy!! I did, other than a nasty chest cold I picked up.

Thanks Vaughn!!

Nea, I agree!!

Floots, I figure telling the therapist "everything" is a big mistake. Some things they are bound by law to tell.

Thanks, silvermoon!! I have a touch of that myself, somedays.

Thank you Peter!!

Thank you Whitney!!

Thanks Jon cox!!

Thanks Andrew!!

Dsnake, thank you!!

J.B. Rowell said...

Gotta love a poet with manners, who thanks everyone personally!
;)

Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

Nice one Pat :) Also a good reminder for me that my dirty laundry is spilling out and over its bin and onto the floor now. Unlike you I dont have much love for my laundry. Sigh...

bre said...

incredibly sweet