His gaze never travels
the shortest distance between two points,
shoulders slink permanently
down ladder rung sides.
He answers to a name,
but usually “hey you”,
a day-labor check for beer and anonymity.
Dreams dulled with the shine
on the last good pair of shoes he owned,
memories are midnight hooligans
rolling his prostrate bones for sleep.
He’s multiplied in geometric progression
building every city’s future.
We walk on their backs
like gray, octagonal, patio-stones
kicking dirt in the cracks.
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Hey you - nice poem. :)
Not Nat Turner
but his very distant brother Ted.
You know--
the one who married Jane,
and turned Atlanta suddenly profane.
Nice one, Pat.
such a weighty poem
I really like this one, Pat - could immediately see the guy - and the expansion out to the many of them. Reminds me of some of Langston Hughes' images. Nicely done.
ohhhhhhhhh, this reminds me so much about a brick layer I knew once, he had built a wonderful downtown structure in Los Angeles, the architect got all the credit, he only laid all 2,000,000 stones.
heavy!
like most of us
i have a few footprints on my back
so this one rang very true
good stuff pat
nice...
i gotta treat for u...on my blog but aurora said u might get hungry..
Many of us can relate to being on the bottom of the totem pole, but few consider the dirt beneath.
Wonderful work.
aa said "stay away from the sweets"
thank u.....
many guys like this one around here, too...
so well written, pat!
check out kai's sweetened entries...
Nice work. Very evocative.
I was at one one of 'em...
You write such soulful poems that blink and twitter like a neon sign. It's impossible for them to go unnoticed.
Wonderful, again.
Great ending. i really like this poem.
great poem, pat!
Your word choice is so impressive...I guess that's why you're a poet, though, huh? :o)
Last three lines very strong, hey you miss the haiku I crafted specially for you, check out the Quiet Heart...!!!!
Hey you-nice comment!!
Thanks Don! Ted Turner is a very profane, egotistical, low life individual. Other than that I find him a very charming guy!
Osguer, thank you!!
Thanks Steve!!
Nea, they always get the credit and never break a sweat!
Thanks Andrew!!
Thanks Floots!! Me too!
Thanks Kai!!
Ozymandiaz, some call it a bed. Thanks!!
They're everywhere. Thank you Polona!!
Thanks Stag!!
Vaughn, you're a perfect example of the cream rising to the top!!
QNT, and your comments are a wonderful power source!! Thank you!!
Thank you David!!
Thank you Jon Cox!!
Thanks Dsnake!!
Whitney it is so good to have you back. Thank you for the kind compliment!!
Plus Ultra, as I said on your site, that'll teach me to be in a hurry. I thank you for the wonderful poem!!!
Liked the imagery Pat!
Pat, the compassion in this was wonderful.
I could see the laborers, especially the ones we tend to forget or ignore.
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