Monday, April 09, 2007

Loose Breeze

A chilly little breeze
rustled flirtatious fingers
through the curious hairs
peeking out of my open shirt.

I quickly turned around,
not wanting to appear
accepting of its advances.

It brazenly nibbled
the outer edges of my ears,
and whispered lewd suggestions
sending shivers down my spine.


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19 comments:

ish said...

Very clever. That is an advance that should be nipped in the bud with an extra sweater.

retroChyld said...

Somebody has a little freak in them. That was too cute and flirty I really truly enjoy this poem.

retroChyld said...

after listening to it--- I felt the breeze myself and welcome it once again. YOu did good, I really enjoy the listening!

Eric said...

that temptress . .

polona said...

titillating...
love it!

Nea said...

hmmmmmmmmm I rather love this poem, it reminds me of something.........You ever try running naked through the back yard.......well not now silly, in about October....when the breeze is balmy....

Yes, I have done this, and there is nothing like the feel of a soft southern breeze on bare skin. I guess I am jut a nudist at heart.....poor neighbors, NO ONE is up at 3am......besides I live near the forest.

Clockworkchris said...

That sounds like one type of breeze I would enjoy having. I love the diction used throughout the poem, esp the first stanza. Thanks for the compliment! I'll add you to my links.

Kai C. said...

i kinda got the Loose Breeze, too.

Katie McKenna said...

Very cute,playful, sexy!

Janice Thomson said...

Oh my that was very sensuous...good one Pat

Masago said...

Aha!

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I like it!
p.s.- Nea, I wouldn't tell people about that :)

Pat Paulk said...

Ish, you're right. Thanks for coming by and commenting!!

Retrochyld, maybe a little. Thanks!!

Eric, they are out there. As always thanks for coming by.

Polona, even a breeze can be sexy. Thanks!!

Nea, no I can honestly say I've never done that. I have skinny dipped. The world prefers I keep my clothes on. Thanks!!

Clockworkchris, thanks. I have added you to mine.

Kai, what did you do with it?

Thanks Katie!!

Thank you Janice Thomson!!

Vaughn, I'm guessing that was a good aha. Thank you!!

Thanks Andrew!! Why not? I know what time sneak around over there now.

gautami tripathy said...

I like that..for obvious reasons!!

Borut said...

Some say that the four types of winds are like the four types of women!:) Which wind was it? I dare say it was the notherly wind - representing the northern type of women!?:)

Tiel Aisha Ansari said...

Hi Pat!

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Beaman said...

I'm obviously not wearing the right deodorant.

Russell Ragsdale said...

Hi Pat! I read this on your blog some time in the recent past and loved it. I's a great addition to the carnival. Glad I caught it again!

Pearl said...

That's fun. :)