A chilly little breeze
rustled flirtatious fingers
through the curious hairs
peeking out of my open shirt.
I quickly turned around,
not wanting to appear
accepting of its advances.
It brazenly nibbled
the outer edges of my ears,
and whispered lewd suggestions
sending shivers down my spine.
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19 comments:
Very clever. That is an advance that should be nipped in the bud with an extra sweater.
Somebody has a little freak in them. That was too cute and flirty I really truly enjoy this poem.
after listening to it--- I felt the breeze myself and welcome it once again. YOu did good, I really enjoy the listening!
that temptress . .
titillating...
love it!
hmmmmmmmmm I rather love this poem, it reminds me of something.........You ever try running naked through the back yard.......well not now silly, in about October....when the breeze is balmy....
Yes, I have done this, and there is nothing like the feel of a soft southern breeze on bare skin. I guess I am jut a nudist at heart.....poor neighbors, NO ONE is up at 3am......besides I live near the forest.
That sounds like one type of breeze I would enjoy having. I love the diction used throughout the poem, esp the first stanza. Thanks for the compliment! I'll add you to my links.
i kinda got the Loose Breeze, too.
Very cute,playful, sexy!
Oh my that was very sensuous...good one Pat
Aha!
I like it!
p.s.- Nea, I wouldn't tell people about that :)
Ish, you're right. Thanks for coming by and commenting!!
Retrochyld, maybe a little. Thanks!!
Eric, they are out there. As always thanks for coming by.
Polona, even a breeze can be sexy. Thanks!!
Nea, no I can honestly say I've never done that. I have skinny dipped. The world prefers I keep my clothes on. Thanks!!
Clockworkchris, thanks. I have added you to mine.
Kai, what did you do with it?
Thanks Katie!!
Thank you Janice Thomson!!
Vaughn, I'm guessing that was a good aha. Thank you!!
Thanks Andrew!! Why not? I know what time sneak around over there now.
I like that..for obvious reasons!!
Some say that the four types of winds are like the four types of women!:) Which wind was it? I dare say it was the notherly wind - representing the northern type of women!?:)
Hi Pat!
The carnival is up at Knocking From Inside! Come check it out.
I'm obviously not wearing the right deodorant.
Hi Pat! I read this on your blog some time in the recent past and loved it. I's a great addition to the carnival. Glad I caught it again!
That's fun. :)
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