Oh, did someone say something terrible t you, Pat? I completely understand this poem (or at least I've interpreted it to relate to seomthing that I understand).
2009! 57 years ago in April I was a 2# squealing baby boy. Got a wonderful tan in an incubator. Made friends with plastic tubing, needles and tape. All of which I have zero recollection. I've been well watered and fertilized over the years, and grown quite ripe. Plastic tubing, needles and tape are catalysts for flashbacks without the buzz. Enjoy!
23 comments:
I've seen gangrene. You've described it perfectly.
Lies do infect and rot. Well done.
Powerful stuff, Pat! I particularly like "Ghosts spawn in the seepage / of pustulous words". Good one.
The first two lines just get embedded it mind..
My first reaction was...What is this!
I relate to this. I can't tell you in what ways..
very dark! speechless...
Was this the poem you lost?
It's dark Pat!
But very good!
Margie
Truth is known,
but lies are chosen.
How a few words can say it all and say it well!!
Oh, did someone say something terrible t you, Pat? I completely understand this poem (or at least I've interpreted it to relate to seomthing that I understand).
The music from the start perfectly prepares the way for
Truth is known,
but lies are chosen
Hey, where's Yoda?
Seriously, Pat, this is powerful stuff!
...from the chronicles of the underbelly of human relations. ;-)
Seven strong, lean lines. This is a muscular little poem of dark truths. Wonderful!
good one, pat
powerful things these words
(and you use them well)
Great piece. Bonus points for finding poetic use of the word pustulous.
Reminds me of my son's VeggieTales movie about the Rumor Weed.
spoken with authority
ah, the power of words!
another wow! poem, pat!
so much power in those words.
great stuff!
Ditto on that ... Ghosts spawn in seepage of pustulous words ... wow ... great group of words.
:o)
Nice way with words!
Powerful words.
Powerful words.
eeeeeeeek.... scary
lotsa luv ann xxxxx
Thanks Rebecca!! They mostly rot the roots they're grown in.
Thanks SB!! Has a real "yucky" image to it.
Gautami, Thanks!! I think most do in vary ways.
Thanks Andrew!! Their are people in this world that should have their vocal chords removed. I include most politicians in that category.
Thanks Margie!! No this is the one I found.
Thanks Corey!!
Thanks Cathy!! I think most of us can.
Thanks Russell!! I slipped over the edge for a brief visit.
Vaughn, dead on!!
Thanks MB!! With all my walking I'm getting quite muscular...NOT!!
Thank you Kai!!
Thanks Floots!!
Doughnutjane,thanks!! I'll take all the bonus points I can get.
C, sounds like some dark reading.
Thanks Mikaelah!! Truth makes for powerful writing.
Polona, you WOW me with your WOW's!! Thanks!!
Thanks Dsnake!!
Thank you Trinitystar!!
Thanks Joyce!!
Thanks Kimmy!!
Real life can be. Thanks Ann!!
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