Saturday, February 17, 2007

Blow On The Bones

My thoughts shoot,
like dice across
a split-felt mind of random,
tumbling black dots decelerating
from blow-on-the-bones frenzy,
to craps, or roll again.

18 comments:

Jim said...

wat do u construct?

floots said...

keep rolling pat
good luck

Pris said...

Vivid. I like this!

Masago said...

Too much to drink at Vegas? :-)

Masago said...

Pat: P.S. Richard's blog is back up:

http://richardmarkkay.blogspot.com/

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I usually crap out. :)

Joyce said...

I empathize!

tongue in cheek said...

Good Luck!

polona said...

i wouldn't trust the dice.
good luck, pat :)

Bill said...

"Rll again>' Could be worse.

samuru999 said...

I always enjoy your poems Pat!
Good luck!

Margie

Russell Ragsdale said...

At least you can be poetic about it (if not philosophical).

trinitystar said...

Lifes a gamble ... take a chance!
:o) love it!

Pat Paulk said...

Jim, buildings.

Floots, as long as these arthritic hands can hold and throw I plan to. thanks!!

Thanks Pris!!

Vaughn, I wish!! Thanks for the link.

Andrew, I've only played craps a few times, didn't do too bad.

Thanks Joyce!!

Thanks Corey!!

Polona, I don't either.They could be loaded.

Bill, you are right!!

Thanks Margie, glad you're back!!

Russell, what's life without a poem??

Trinitystar, everyday we wake up we take a chance. Thank you!!

Don Iannone said...

Good one, Pat. Definitely on a roll.

gautami tripathy said...

The words chased around in my mind. A great feeling, this.

MB said...

This has a great feel to it, Pat.

Carol said...

Yeah, you never know where those thoughts will land.