My thoughts shoot,
like dice across
a split-felt mind of random,
tumbling black dots decelerating
from blow-on-the-bones frenzy,
to craps, or roll again.
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- Pat Paulk
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18 comments:
wat do u construct?
keep rolling pat
good luck
Vivid. I like this!
Too much to drink at Vegas? :-)
Pat: P.S. Richard's blog is back up:
http://richardmarkkay.blogspot.com/
I usually crap out. :)
I empathize!
Good Luck!
i wouldn't trust the dice.
good luck, pat :)
"Rll again>' Could be worse.
I always enjoy your poems Pat!
Good luck!
Margie
At least you can be poetic about it (if not philosophical).
Lifes a gamble ... take a chance!
:o) love it!
Jim, buildings.
Floots, as long as these arthritic hands can hold and throw I plan to. thanks!!
Thanks Pris!!
Vaughn, I wish!! Thanks for the link.
Andrew, I've only played craps a few times, didn't do too bad.
Thanks Joyce!!
Thanks Corey!!
Polona, I don't either.They could be loaded.
Bill, you are right!!
Thanks Margie, glad you're back!!
Russell, what's life without a poem??
Trinitystar, everyday we wake up we take a chance. Thank you!!
Good one, Pat. Definitely on a roll.
The words chased around in my mind. A great feeling, this.
This has a great feel to it, Pat.
Yeah, you never know where those thoughts will land.
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