Soft, white petals
tumble down the slope
of a gentle breeze.
Birdsong, like
a kite tail, follows
a setting sun.
My thoughts
end the day
on the night ahead.
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15 comments:
Plain beautiful...how could you not have sweet dreams going to bed with thoughts like this?
A nice a peaceful though to keep with me for the day. Thanks
After yesterday's beef this is sugar and spice.
This is soothing to the mind after that turbulent stew..
This is beautiful Pat...savored every serene word of it.
very peaceful......beautiful and enjoyable Pat...... :)
I was envying your serene and lyrical state of mind--(so unlike mine)--
then I read the previous poem--
Oh, now I get it--yin and yang...!
Lovely flow ... and sereness.
:o)
Have a wonderful day.
A beauty, Pat. Nicely done.
Thanks Vaughn!!
Thanks Nancy!!
Corey, ghost stew ain't too tasty!! Thanks!!
Gautami, yes it is!!
Thanks Janice Thomson!!
Thanks Nea!!
Vivian, serene like a roller coaster.
Thank you Trinitystar!!
ThanksDon!!
I especially like that second stanza. It's a great image.
beautiful. just beautiful!
I love it, simply beautiful!:)
"birdsong like a kite tail" - great
Peaceful and lyrical -- a wonderful moment's experience. Just great Pat! I can see I have sopme catching up to do! Are you busy too? I don't see any posts after the 23rd.
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