tree limbs
blooming with birdsong—
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27 comments:
I give you...
a standing ovation
for this one Pat!
Beautiful...love it!
I can see dancers in flowers. They are so elegant and feminine.
A photo!!!! And a nice one, too. :)
nice one pat
A nice departure from Pat's usual form...you might to tell him his poetry is c-h-a-n-g-i-n-g.
I like!
and purty purty Flowers
have a great weekend!
Perfect!
pat, do chk my last poem when you have time.
I can smell the spring in the air here too. The change is intoxicating! Nice one Pat.
very nice, love the picture, my crocus's are just coming up and blooming but its SNOWING now. Life in new england.
Wonderful Pat...I can see it in my mind.
Your words are to the point :) Very nice
wow! a photo and a haiku!!
love it! :)
clapping.......love this Pat......both picture and Ku.....
Simple and beautiful. Photo goes well with the writing.
The whole creation is filled to the brim with sexual energy, especially in spring!?:) Or is it just in my mind!?:)
Lovely poem and photo! Worth rereading again and again...
(but I'm SO jealous while snow and biting sleet are covering my just-hatched crocuses...here in NYC)
standing ovation to your photo entry Pat...
I missed a few of your poems...
will get back soon to read those...
Ahh- Your words play the dance of nature so well.
nice haiku, I thought, but is it? 2-5-5? I still like it and its hopeful message. I love the birds singing in the morning, even up here you can here them sing before sunrise, spring can't be far behind
ha, i see you are trying a haiku, and a good one too!
and a lovely bonus photo to go along. :)
Magnificent! I like. You've captured it in such a way that I didn't even recall Wordsworth's daffodils, which i always did upon seeing a bunch of them. Good job.
went to a concert last night - these could be the proud performers even performing as an audience to the Spring around them - good picture!
Daffodils were blooming the early March day my daughter was born in S. Carolina (two decades ago now...)
I bow to your kind "ovation". Thanks Margie!!
Thanks C I like that!!
Thanks MB!!
Thanks Andrew!! Just point and click.
Thanks Floots!!
Don, thanks!! I hope for the better.
Thanks Janice, you too!!
Thanks Kai!!
Gautami, I did and left a comment. thank you!!
Thanks Russell!! Spring is definitely that.
I just say no to snow. thanks Nancy!!
Thanks Janice!!
Thank you Lyrically speaking!!
Thanks Polona!! A little change is good for the soul, and a lot of change is good for my pocket.
Nea, all applause is greatly appreciated. Thank you!!
Thanks Beaman!!
Borut, you are absolutely right. Love is in the air!!
Thanks Vivian!! That's why I love the South!!
Amalendu, glad to have you back. Thank you!!
And GEL your comment plays me so well. Thank you!!
Sage, my favorite type of music. In Western haiku the syllable count is not as important as Japanese, so I'm told. I think the last line could be written stronger. Still thinking about it.
Thank you!!
Dsnake, don't do it often, but once in awhile I try. Thank you!!
Rethabile, WOW, to be compared with Wordsworth. What a high compliment, thank you!!
Steve that's what they reminded me of, a proud audience. A Spring baby, the best kind!!
Spring fever Pat lovely
Bravo!
lovely...the words and the picture
donna
see your planting is underway.
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