Her breasts stared at me
like menu items
from a favorite restaurant.
Not many places you can go,
and bury your face
in an entrée of choice.
The rain tickled
the smooth skin of glass,
we held our laughter inside.
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ...... a breast man......
ahhh...I always love a randy one:-)
i have no comment....
but uh? ur bad.....
This is like, three haiku poems back to back right?
Once again reflects poets are indeed human and underlying whatever we write is passion in one form or another.
"like menu items"
Hah! I want to go to that restaurant! :)
I liked the way you spread your words and capture imagination...
It requires the skills of the fisherman (folk)...
well netted...
Seductive and playful at the same time. Very well done Pat. "The rain tickled the smooth skin of glass" Love that line!
I'm sending out apologies for my temporary disappearance as June proved to be an all consuming month for me.
Titilating? Or tit-elating?
nicely done. laughter and lust. comfort and contempt?
Funny. Sexy.
You can't get a more heady combination for poetry!
Erotic! Madonna would surely love this one!
Hey Waiter! More lusty poems, please! Heheh!!!
Pat, I left a comment on your last post. Actually two since it accidentally doubled up. It's ok, your brilliant poem deserves a double dose of compliments!
wow, sensual with a typical pat paulk touch... enjoyed!
racey, but a good write none the less.
I've always preferred entrees to side dishes
You are a very talented poet.
A little bit racy... but a great poem. Erotic and full of fun too.
such a nice image/s
My daughter made this a couple years back, I was reading your site and remembered it, thought I would show it to you. .........I thought it kind of appropriate to your site.....haha
http://neababyblu.blogspot.com/2006/06/laughing-ghost.html
Nea,mmmmmmmmmmmmm yes ma'am!!!
Pris, what's a little "randy" among friends???
Kai, it's Aurora's fault!!
Stag, you're right. Didn't write it that way, but it does sound like it. Good observation.
Don, I think I heard someone say, "there are those that talk/write about it, and those that..."
Andrew, me too!!
Shyamalee thank you!!
Boulies, no apologies needed! Glad you're back. I do like playing!! Thank you!!
J Cosmo Newbery, yes!!!
Inkblot, thank you!! All of the above!
River, no ma'am I don't think you can!! Thanks!!
Medusa, your order has been taken and will be up shortly!! Thank you!!
Boulise I'm always up for a "double" helping!!
Polona, thank you!! It's the only touch I know!
Thank you Mandy!!
Shane, I obviously agree!!
Samuru999, I try my best!! Thank you!!
Mikaelah, I certainly thought so!!
Nea, loved it!!
Your words tickle our insides. :-)
Great fun, lovers and a shared joke
its not aurora's fault....
its ur harmonoes....
haha
Vaughn, thank you!! Laughter is good!!
Sue Hardy-Dawson, yes! Thank you!!
Kai, you made me spit my coke all over my computer screen. I gave up hormones for wrinkles a "couple" of years ago! Toooo funny!!
i didn't mean for u to spit all over ur screen computer...
oh yes aurora call u strange..
did a little inner shimmy
with my nerves
so it MUST be good :)
cheers
Nothing more sexy than a man who loves his lovers breasts! Being on the recieving end is quiet nice as well!
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