Sunday, June 25, 2006

Brace Of Breasts

Her breasts stared at me
like menu items
from a favorite restaurant.
Not many places you can go,
and bury your face
in an entrée of choice.
The rain tickled
the smooth skin of glass,
we held our laughter inside.

27 comments:

Nea said...

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ...... a breast man......

Pris said...

ahhh...I always love a randy one:-)

Poetry by Kai said...

i have no comment....

but uh? ur bad.....

STAG said...

This is like, three haiku poems back to back right?

Don Iannone said...

Once again reflects poets are indeed human and underlying whatever we write is passion in one form or another.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

"like menu items"
Hah! I want to go to that restaurant! :)

Amalendu said...

I liked the way you spread your words and capture imagination...
It requires the skills of the fisherman (folk)...
well netted...

boulies said...

Seductive and playful at the same time. Very well done Pat. "The rain tickled the smooth skin of glass" Love that line!
I'm sending out apologies for my temporary disappearance as June proved to be an all consuming month for me.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Titilating? Or tit-elating?

Inkblot said...

nicely done. laughter and lust. comfort and contempt?

~River~ said...

Funny. Sexy.

You can't get a more heady combination for poetry!

Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

Erotic! Madonna would surely love this one!
Hey Waiter! More lusty poems, please! Heheh!!!

boulies said...

Pat, I left a comment on your last post. Actually two since it accidentally doubled up. It's ok, your brilliant poem deserves a double dose of compliments!

polona said...

wow, sensual with a typical pat paulk touch... enjoyed!

bre said...

racey, but a good write none the less.

Shane said...

I've always preferred entrees to side dishes

samuru999 said...

You are a very talented poet.
A little bit racy... but a great poem. Erotic and full of fun too.

mikaelah said...

such a nice image/s

Nea said...

My daughter made this a couple years back, I was reading your site and remembered it, thought I would show it to you. .........I thought it kind of appropriate to your site.....haha

http://neababyblu.blogspot.com/2006/06/laughing-ghost.html

Pat Paulk said...

Nea,mmmmmmmmmmmmm yes ma'am!!!

Pris, what's a little "randy" among friends???

Kai, it's Aurora's fault!!

Stag, you're right. Didn't write it that way, but it does sound like it. Good observation.

Don, I think I heard someone say, "there are those that talk/write about it, and those that..."

Andrew, me too!!

Shyamalee thank you!!

Boulies, no apologies needed! Glad you're back. I do like playing!! Thank you!!

J Cosmo Newbery, yes!!!

Inkblot, thank you!! All of the above!

River, no ma'am I don't think you can!! Thanks!!

Medusa, your order has been taken and will be up shortly!! Thank you!!

Boulise I'm always up for a "double" helping!!

Polona, thank you!! It's the only touch I know!

Thank you Mandy!!

Shane, I obviously agree!!

Samuru999, I try my best!! Thank you!!

Mikaelah, I certainly thought so!!

Nea, loved it!!

Masago said...

Your words tickle our insides. :-)

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Great fun, lovers and a shared joke

Poetry by Kai said...

its not aurora's fault....

its ur harmonoes....

haha

Pat Paulk said...

Vaughn, thank you!! Laughter is good!!

Sue Hardy-Dawson, yes! Thank you!!

Kai, you made me spit my coke all over my computer screen. I gave up hormones for wrinkles a "couple" of years ago! Toooo funny!!

Poetry by Kai said...

i didn't mean for u to spit all over ur screen computer...
oh yes aurora call u strange..

floots said...

did a little inner shimmy
with my nerves
so it MUST be good :)
cheers

temppixie said...

Nothing more sexy than a man who loves his lovers breasts! Being on the recieving end is quiet nice as well!