Mood lighting is enhancement, not the mood.
It beckons the shadows of seduction
to dance like titillated warriors around
the reflection flickering in your eyes.
It has allure and ambience,
draperies of intimate invitation
hanging in the background, the background only.
So I say “candle’s arse”, when you say
that’s what makes the photograph hot;
it’s you, and only you, that
has the breath to blow it out.
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I am totally captivated with this poem Pat!
to dance like titillated warriors around
the reflection flickering in your eyes. Wow!
Amazing!
Love it!
As the comment above demonstrates, this poem has a heat of its own.
it’s you, and only you, that
has the breath to blow it out.
— breathtaking.
candle's and photograph,
nice
captivating, sensual... another gem of yours, pat!
phew!!!
such romance! such sensualite!!!
Very much like a passionate dance.
This makes me think that you wrote it in the '70s. I know you didn't, but I don't know -- I guess it's the "mood" and the candles....
Very nice.
it’s you, and only you, that
has the breath to blow it out.
to be noticed, with or without flashing lights. Your eyes notice what is real!
Romantic truth !
thanks for brightening up an otherwise dull day, pat!
A sensuality that spreads around the light...
And,
It beckons the shadows of seduction
to dance like titillated warriors around
the reflection flickering in your eyes.
well said Pat...
Very titillating!
Visualisation was titilation for me. This is sheer poetry.
A rare dance of emotions-with a little giggle in
never in my life have I tried to envision the arse of a candle... or even known it could have one. delightfully hot writing.
sounds like a love poem...
This made me laugh...probably shouldn't have, but there you have it (made me grin, might be a better description). :)
Patrick...who again has the "hot" arse?
Margie always happy to captivate!!
Thank you!!
MB, I guess that was the point!! Thank you, the pleasures mine!!
Thank you Janice!!
Thank you Polona!!
Gulnaz the photo deserved such a sensual poem!! Tahnk you!!
C, looked like the beginning of one to me!!
Andrew with 4 kids you certainly have been using candles, recently. I was living on a different planet then. Thank you!!
Tongue in cheek, you nailed it. Yes, I thought I did. Thank you for coming by. I enjoyed your blog yesterday!!
Karasu, glad to help!! Thank you!!
Amalendu, thank you sir!!
Joyce thank you!!
Gautami, not according to some in reading the article on your blog, but, some like to share their limited viewpoint with the world. Thank you!!
Sue, it was more like a YAHOOOOOOO!!!! Thank you!!!
Mikaelah, I guess anything whatever sits on? Thank you, it was fun to write, and equally as much fun to comment on!!
Kai, of a sort. thank you!! Happy Birthday tomorrow!!!!
Cathy, what's sensuality without some laughter. Me thinks alot of steam that just turns to fog!!
Don, I'm not telling!!
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