I wonder if you’re sleeping
in a foreign dream
I know nothing about?
Is the air you’re breathing
paid for ‘til check out time?
Did you leave a wake-up call
for the sound of my voice?
Questions are all you left me,
so I’ll drop these,
like a fairy tale,
hoping you’ll
find your way home.
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Whenever I type in word verification, it makes me type, "Iheartgrits", but I digress.....:)
Seriously, you're on a roll lately, but what's with all the break-up poems? Do you want to make Kai sad again?
the last five lines of this are perfect.
This foreign land of dreams where people we care about walk on their own .. unreachable. Myrriad images rush through the mind. And every guess is as good as it gets. Beautiful poem.
damn, Paul. bravo.
grr. Pat, i meant. PAULk got stuck in there!!!!
ya pat do u want to make me sad? lol
i like this one.....
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Wonderful depth here, I loved this!
wonderful
full of poignancy and highways
No, I don't. My muse hasn't been getting enough "grits" lately. I think she's telling me something.
Lukas, thank you for the perfect comment!!
Natalia, "...and every guess is as good as it gets", great line!! Beautiful comment, thank you very much!!
Damn, Harry,...David, I hate when my fingers get in the way of my typos!! Thanks David!!
No Kai, Aurora just likes being mean to me. I always appreciate your comments!!
Jon, you have a great blog, it was my privilege!! Thanks!!
Russell thanks for the compliment. Never been accused of depth before!!
Thanks floots!! The goodbye highway if I don't get this muse some beer and grits!!
beautifully written!
I simply love this!
Oh these "Question Crumbs" are delicious. A perfect food for my poetic senses. Thanks for dropping in at my blog Pat. :-))
Cheers
Dan
Polona, Pris and Dan thanks!!
Sad and lovely! I read this several times to injest that familiar longing.
The honesty is beautiful.
haven't logged on for a while. I missed your poems!
Boulies thank you!! All too familiar a longing for far too many!
Luanne, thank you!! I'm glad you found your way back!
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