I can’t draw a straight line
with a ruler,
dead sober,
150 watts bursting glass seams,
on any given day,
if my life depended on it!
But, you want me to walk one,
pitch dark,
dead drunk,
headlights whizzing by.
Sir, would it be acceptable
if I crawled
from point A to B?
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Thank you Pat for your comment on my drawings. They are a surprise to me every time they come out of the pen. I like your site very much too.
This is so perfect, Pat. Love it!:-)
Funny, trying go straight...:)
Sometimes crawling ain't even safe enough...LOL
ouch!
i like this even better the second time around! :)
:) Love the humour in your work Pat!
Sangeet
interesting pat:)
did u have a wonderful weekend?
i did enjoy it...i got lazy....lol
Like the quote from Men In Black, "No mam, we at the FBI do not have a sense of humor that we are aware of."
Pat, I like this. It's really funny. I wonder if I could walk that line under those conditions, with nerves and knees all a-shaking, with police breathing down my neck, dead sober. Don't think so.
thank u pat!
have a good day:)
Nice poems Pat. I'm going to have to come back and visit. Thanks for stopping by my site.
Celeste, thank you for coming by and commenting. Your artwork is beautiful!!
Pris, thanks! Thankfully it's not a real experience.
Thanks Borut!
Dunzo, thanks for commenting. You're right sometimes, it's not!!
Thank you Polona!!
Sangeet somebody has to be the south end of the horse. I do a pretty good job of it!! Thank you!!
Thnaks Kai!!
Russell, love that movie. You're right they don't!!
Thanks Boulies!! Don't think I could either.
Sage, it was a pleasure. Thanks for commenting!!
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