In human heart surgery, the clogged vessels are bypassed and blood flows to places deprived of the life giving fluid...at any rate the construction you see now reducing 6 to 2 will soon be completed and making 2 to 8...and life will be the better because of the work..
I hope this isn't an obscure way of telling us about a medical need as in PU's post. If it's just a traffic observation, then I'm glad I wasn't there. :-)
2009! 57 years ago in April I was a 2# squealing baby boy. Got a wonderful tan in an incubator. Made friends with plastic tubing, needles and tape. All of which I have zero recollection. I've been well watered and fertilized over the years, and grown quite ripe. Plastic tubing, needles and tape are catalysts for flashbacks without the buzz. Enjoy!
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not a place to be! ;/
Yeeess!!!!! ;-)
interesting
Succinct — you found the essential pulse of the poem! (And I'm so glad I'm not there!)
Yes, very imaginative!
Very good Pat!
Margie
good one, pat! :)
everyday mate, on my way to london. bang on the nail with this one.
In human heart surgery, the clogged vessels are bypassed and blood flows to places deprived of the life giving fluid...at any rate the construction you see now reducing 6 to 2 will soon be completed and making 2 to 8...and life will be the better because of the work..
Sounds about right. You're not from Baton Rouge, are you?
I like it! It worked well. :o)
I hope this isn't an obscure way of telling us about a medical need as in PU's post. If it's just a traffic observation, then I'm glad I wasn't there. :-)
Oh that sounds like road rage haven.
They say walking is good for you (and avoids the jams)
Heartbeat Highway
doesn't happen too often here but i remember it oh so well
nicely captured
I like such short poems which are loaded with meaning.
Deft play of words, Pat :-)
No ma'am, in whatever sense!!
Sb, just for you!!
Kai, it is isn't it??
MB, hopefully I'm not. Thank you!!
Thanks Joyce!!
Thank you Margie!!
Polona, thank you!!
CJ, fortunately I don't have to often, but on the days I do... thank you sir!!
Plus Ultra, you just have to live through the construction/surgery.
DoughnutJane, no, but I've been through there. I live outside of Hotlanta, and this Summer it lived up to its name. Thank you!!
Trinitystar, thank you!!
Vaughn, I certainly hope not!! The overtones were intentional, I hope not prophetic.
C, it was!! Could be in the other sense too.
Russell, I actually have been doing that, 2 miles 3 and 4 days a week. Hopefully, I will keep it up.
TIC, in all senses!!
No, Floots, other than with sheep and bicycles, I understand it wouldn't. Thank you!!
Gautami, my muse was lazy yesterday. Actually, everyday, but, more so yesterday. Thank you!!
Thanks Pris!!
WOW!
Neat.
now maybe we can see a 2 line poem? :)
A different style for you, but I liked it.
Thanks Pat. It was worth the wait! :-)
sounds like my drive home!
i really get a kick out of shorts :)
two cool ones Pat.
Dsnake, thank you!! Who knows...
Thanks Don!! Well I got to 4, so for SB went to 3. Who knows about 2 or beyond.
SB, you are quite welcome!!
Andrew I feel for you!!
Inconsequential, I do too. Thank you!!
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