Thursday, November 02, 2006

Continuity

I dog-eared the page,
broke the continuity of forests
cut, logged and pressed.

Everything read before
bled through the cracks,
flowing onto what I’ll read next.


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12 comments:

Anonymous said...

short, sharp and very, very sweet!

p.s. I'm enjoying your readings too, pat.

Poetry by Kai said...

:-)

MB said...

Nice one! Interesting to see the pages as trees!

samuru999 said...

Oh, I like this one Pat!
Very nice!
Great reading!
Thanks.

Margie:)

mikaelah said...

wow!
What an image of timelessness.
Hearing your voice an added treat.

polona said...

still dog-earing the pages, pat?
beautifully succinct... love it!

Don Iannone said...

Great job reading this one. Really enjoy hearing your voice.

Masago said...

Nice, a lot going on here.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice -- your voice is perfect for this kind of thing :)

floots said...

a great way to sum up our reading/living experiences
thank you

Pat Paulk said...

Thanks SB!!

Thank you Kai!!

MB, I may play with those firat two lines some more. I think there's more there and I got sidetracked. Thank you!!

Thank you Margie!! Enjoyed your new poem. Would love to hear you read??

Thank you Mikaelah!!

Bad habits don't go away easy... Thank you Polona!!

Thank you Don!!

Thanks Vaughn!! I think my muse is telling me to go back I didn't get it right.

Thank you Andrew!!

Thanks Floots!!

S. Thomas Summers said...

yes...a fine piece.

STS